Alterations to Page Two

As I said a few posts previous, I'm documenting all this now but the comic was done around 2 weeks ago, so the changes I'm showing here were reworked a few days ago from todays date. This page in particular wasnt really working, especially Marty's face, I mean is he supposed to be a fish or a guy? Was hard to tell before to be honest.

So this was one revisit of Marty's face