Looking back at this now it does really feel like the first draft. The general feel of the layout doesnt really flow and the contrast between brighter pages to dark plays on your eyes. The intro page with the comic spread is extremely lazy. Appears like I just threw it in to take the space. I mean, the comic is in the content of the book itself, why show it on the first page? Not sure what the intro pages to each chapter is really doing either, looks like I'm trying to push the front cover around the book even though it doesnt work.
Other pages such as 'Sorry about your barn' were confused. This is a line that Michael J. Fox's character says immediately after the last image shown in the comic. This was thrown in as a draft for development but even so I was struggling to see it's relevance and wether an audience would see this as a suitable way to conclude the section - I did not.
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